The Power Girl

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Thanks. I asked him that 'cause I did the same mistake as him some time ago, with a newb, and after that incident I felt kinda sorry 'cause the guy quit mugen. It's very important to give a constructive feedback... It's all about morality. And, "There are many beta versions of many characters that aren't nearly as bad as this one." -- Sorry, I don't see the constructive part in this. OK, that's all I have to say. [/quote]


This happened to me too, it was the same way, I had converted sasquatch to mvc, was some of my first attempts.


some people followed me, then they thanked me for having done, others praised.


Then a very famous figure in mugen enter my topic and say that my works were mediocre, then thanked for launch, Some who followed the release changed their opinion agreed with him, I felt bad, it was like being humiliated in public, but I have not stopped to this day

not bad for a beta.. she need different explod for heat vision or scale it, try = 1,0.5.. for normal attack with legs edit her foot

wow good job

Glad to see Power Girl's finally ready for download---I've wanted her on my roster for AGES.

hello my friend, she is good for a beta release, with a few more animations to make fluid movements will be a great character, not call for critics that put you down, mugen is for Amusement and for those who have the courage to perform a job , a big hug!

gartanham wrote:

hello my friend, she is good for a beta release, with a few more animations to make fluid movements will be a great character, not call for critics that put you down, mugen is for Amusement and for those who have the courage to perform a job , a big hug!

Obrigado amigo, coloquei esta versão beta para downloard para justamente receber feedbacks e saber o que melhorar! Sei que nao sou profissional e faço chars e screepack ou estágios para me divertir jogando com meus amigos. Em mugem devemos analisar apenas as opiniões boas, que te ajudam a melhorar o que se esta fazendo!

Forte abraço amigo e ate breve!

decentish for a beta, but much work needed

feedback (much mentioned already but will include everything i noticed for completist sake):
- in general, the sprite design is nice
- good ideas in the moveset
- the biggest thing needing to address is add more frames of animation to all of the basic attacks (crouching, standing, and air)
- next biggest thing to address is the need to add sound fx to many things
- i think the body positioning for all of the crouching kicks seems weird and wouldnt mind if you made all new ones
- make an all new walk forward for 2 reasons. standardize with the walk back (weird to have flight in going backwards, but then walk going forwards seems weird). also, the body proportions seem off compared to the other sprites (i.e. she is taller/bigger)
- would like a better beam fx on the heat vision and need to animate her a little more
- more animation needed on the throw
- give the capes, head and hair more animation to appear more lifelike and fluid
- voice clips needed
- damage a little high on the heat vision hyper version
- need to put in standard sized port for 9000,0 sprite (25x25)
- the main port is misaligned and has alot of color loss on the edges of the transparency
- need to fix up the clsn boxes better
- need to add a taunt and a shocked state
- many people dont like downloading or can't download from 4shared.com links

Thank you, I like her alot. Is that a preview of a Hawkgirl WIP in the image with her?

woaoeewwwwwwww thanks bro you are amazing

good luck with your update in the future.

love it

volzzilla wrote:

decentish for a beta, but much work needed

feedback (much mentioned already but will include everything i noticed for completist sake):
- in general, the sprite design is nice
- good ideas in the moveset
- the biggest thing needing to address is add more frames of animation to all of the basic attacks (crouching, standing, and air)
- next biggest thing to address is the need to add sound fx to many things
- i think the body positioning for all of the crouching kicks seems weird and wouldnt mind if you made all new ones
- make an all new walk forward for 2 reasons. standardize with the walk back (weird to have flight in going backwards, but then walk going forwards seems weird). also, the body proportions seem off compared to the other sprites (i.e. she is taller/bigger)
- would like a better beam fx on the heat vision and need to animate her a little more
- more animation needed on the throw
- give the capes, head and hair more animation to appear more lifelike and fluid
- voice clips needed
- damage a little high on the heat vision hyper version
- need to put in standard sized port for 9000,0 sprite (25x25)
- the main port is misaligned and has alot of color loss on the edges of the transparency
- need to fix up the clsn boxes better
- need to add a taunt and a shocked state
- many people dont like downloading or can't download from 4shared.com links

I'm willing to do more work on her, I'm just waiting for anderson to tap my shoulder. But I work on gameplay and hit boxes, someone else would have to do the sprite work.

I Liked!!! Congratulations!!!

dev wrote:

Macaulyn wrote:

Gimme a break, there are many betas that aren't bad as this one.

Nobody is forcing you to keep this char in your roster. Delete it and make your own one.

and here we go again...This is why I don't miss Mugen sometimes.

He is right, listen to the feedback, fix what is needed and carry on.

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Sei que nao sou profissional e faço chars e screepack ou estágios para me divertir jogando com meus amigos. Em mugem devemos analisar apenas as opiniões boas

Quer um conselho? Não faça isso. Isso é um costume bem infantil que alguns criadores tem. Tem gente que só aceita crítica se for coberta de açúcar. Tudo bem vc fazer para se divertir, mas se existe algo errado, é legal que seja corrigido. E não devemos somente analisar opniões boas, caso contrário nunca evoluiremos.

Críticas negativas são importantes, e bem mais importantes do que as boas se vc quer saber minha opnião. Nunca se iluda com somente comentários bons, pq em vários casos a pessoa só quer o char, não está nem aí se é bom ou não.

Ouça o que a galera tem a dizer, arrume o que precisa ser feito e contiue o trabalho

boa sorte.

Eu concordo, não é que eu apoie os comentários grosseiros e críticas, mais a vida é assim mesmo, se você não se esforçar vai ter sempre alguém vindo de carrinho pra quebrar suas duas pernas, eu digo por experiência de vida.