WIP Reveal: Abomination by cravd

What the hell is wrong with his back though?
And the shading on the underwear looks really bad.

Very nice

perfect work  

good work really amazing

@erroratu: nothing is wrong with his back. he's a monster, hence the name. monsters are often portrayed as hunchbacked. and i think the tights look fine in arkady's touched up version.

I haven't edited anything bar the lines, and the shorts are darker on the lines version, but the detail work looks fine, i think your over cooking it erroratu, I'm sure there's gonna be a whole lot more discrepancies, but it can wait till the character is built, btw i think i can give some advise to new creators

remember, build your characters first! Don't waste time getting the perfect sprites made (unless that is all your forte is) if you code and sprite, then stick to making the template first, the fun stuff can come later in editing to your preference and mistakes, that's how you learn, its also a quicker process

No seriously he seems to grow a hunch during his walk.
Like his back look normal until he turns them to the camera,then they get bigger.

good work!

nice base = wooooow

se ve muy bien .enhorabuena   

Well abomination shouldn't grow a hunch, he already should have it, I'll check out what you mean erroratu

checked it again, it looks fine, his back rises a bit from his arm reverting backwards, its ok, the back is doing what its supposed to do, its just the arms swinging that raises the back a bit, i can lower it a bit but its not a big deal, besides i really haven't aligned the sprites for this work perfectly yet, just got exited to show everyone

love that look   

During the walk, it looks like some of the lines are jumping around. Aside from that, very nice

Erroratu wrote:

What the hell is wrong with his back though?
And the shading on the underwear looks really bad.

I was more distracted by his glitchy arm.  Why does it bounce back and forth so quick when he pulls it back?


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I'm also going to agree with the shading.  I only really notice it in the lighter blue.  I can't really do better, so I'll shut up though.

for those of you who did not know...

cravd did not use a base for what he made. its from scratch. sometimes custom spriting from scratch with no base can lead to some animation inconsistencies. i'm sure whatever will be addressed in time before release.

Yeah I'll make a better GIF, to show it better, right now I'm still drawing the rest of the lines on other 200+ pics cravd made, I have say I'm very impressed with the sheet he has produced
(I'm halfway folks)