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Posts : 838 Join date : 2012-06-15 Location : Australia
Subject: Re: TREVOR FITZROY X-MEN MARVEL November 10th 2012, 12:23 am
Wow
You are the gift that just keeps on giving
Congrats on yet another release
Ax
Posts : 3158 Join date : 2012-06-02
Subject: Re: TREVOR FITZROY X-MEN MARVEL November 12th 2012, 4:48 am
This character is very good, it has a lot of good animations, some very unique. This is clearly one of your best characters. I like to see more detailed works like this one, very much improved and tons better!
I recommend the download
I don't enjoy a lot of characters, even super professional works, but this one I have to admit was a very fun play for me. Was not expecting to have fun at all LOL
off of ax's recommendation, i thought i'd check this out.
while its much more complete than your avalanche, alot of work needed. - better detailing on sprites - more sprites for animations - command strings for gameplay kind of different - while i liked your concepts, could do more. for example have him drain p2 like it mentions regarding his powers. wiki also mentions how he commanded some sentinels too
hope you look into doing more as he has potential
O Ilusionista
Posts : 1305 Join date : 2012-05-16 Location : Brazil
I know its one of your first chars and such, but I need to be honest (and we talked about this via pm other day): its bad.
-The sprites range from poor to bad, but the animations are all bad. Take his crouched weak kick...its bizarre. And people say "lot of good animations"? Come on, guys, this won't help him to be a better creator, it will just fool him
- He uses the same legs for almost every attack
-Everything needs work, from sprites, to animation, to sounds. Its KFM sound almost everytime.
I think instead of making one char after another, you should go back and finish or polish the chars more.
I know its one of your first chars and such, but I need to be honest (and we talked about this via pm other day): its bad.
-The sprites range from poor to bad, but the animations are all bad. Take his crouched weak kick...its bizarre. And people say "lot of good animations"? Come on, guys, this won't help him to be a better creator, it will just fool him
- He uses the same legs for almost every attack
-Everything needs work, from sprites, to animation, to sounds. Its KFM sound almost everytime.
I think instead of making one char after another, you should go back and finish or polish the chars more.
i agree with O on this, i also think you admin here should actually look at his stuff before hosting it as well. i left some feedback on his other releases as well. they need alot of work. avalanche... i expected better is all i will say
Well I wasn't trying to fool him, I really do like those effects and attacks.
The fire look and the 3D frame thing is enjoyable, at least for me.
I even stated that I like to see more works like this one, implying that this work, having more work done than the others, is much more better, maybe it would encourage him to make more effort in his next wips to try harder and make more detail.
I like the honest feedback though, perhaps danubissecreto can benefit from some spriting help and tutoring?
danubissecreto, if you want I can help you out.
Why don't I start here?
starting from the basics
Proper merging of bases in wips
Next I notice the wip lacks some colors?Try this out
If you need more help, let me know, we can work together Don't give up
danubissecreto
Posts : 83 Join date : 2012-07-29 Location : BUENOS AIRES ARGENTINA
You may not like my job, it is a hobby and develop the way I can with the knowledge I have I will surely get better and the idea is that by sharing something you can change or work cooperatively.
O Ilusionista
Posts : 1305 Join date : 2012-05-16 Location : Brazil
You may not like my job, it is a hobby and develop the way I can with the knowledge I have I will surely get better and the idea is that by sharing something you can change or work cooperatively.
Its not a matter of not liking your job, and I know that you make it with the knowledge you have. This is exaclty my point: to show you what is wrong so you can learn and get better. Everyone of us had pass through this, we are here to help.
NotDoom
Posts : 42 Join date : 2012-05-28 Location : Argentina
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