AVALANCHE MARVEL

Avalanche marvel




-http://www.mediafire.com/?ov963lekzpz5hbb

Excellent, it seems I'll have to increase the X-Men Download section now

Thanks, this night add more

will definitely check this one and give feedback

grace by another version of avalanche

thanks for sharing and download

this character just made me sad a little, ill just give small feedback for now.

for one the stance is weird but i couldve dealt with that if the attacks werent so... ummm i dont know to explain. all i can say is that most of the sprites in the sff are the same. the moves are ok somewhat but the sounds are kind of weird.


all in all this could be a great character if some effort was put into it. no disrespect at all. i just kind of had high hopes for this one. this was all in just 2 minutes of testing

gonna go test your other characters now

Test his Trevor Fitzroy, I think it's one of his most recent works and one of his best. This Avalanche was probably his first, a decent try

I did like the sleek look on this Avalanche though. Someday maybe you could come back to this and give it another try. The move ideas are good, with some overall refinement maybe this character can be better received.

Keep working at it danubissecreto, you got the right ideas

Ax wrote:

Test his Trevor Fitzroy, I think it's one of his most recent works and one of his best. This Avalanche was probably his first, a decent try

I did like the sleek look on this Avalanche though. Someday maybe you could come back to this and give it another try. The move ideas are good, with some overall refinement maybe this character can be better received.

Keep working at it danubissecreto, you got the right ideas

O pretty much summed up his trevor. honestly his best creation are his kyle and his hiphop man and they need a little work. i like his enthusiasm but i would really love it if he would go back and polish some things especially with this one. i really had high hopes for this one because i like the sleek look

Thanks for the opinion Samurai!

no problem man anytime

i have to say that i'm not entirely sure this is ready for a release,
when making iconic characters= do home work, making avalanche sleek is not following the comics or animes or whatever carnation of x-men there is (except evolution) and this does't look like evolution,
i haven't given feedback (which is totally important) due to i have my own avalanche which is being updated plus other works i'm busy with, but i was intrigued to see this, i'm not convinced that this will get any better in spritework as it seems very cut and paste on 90 degree angles, you must spend time on sprites and try to frankensprite from another base if you cannot draw well (that's what i do), you cannot have bad looking sprites, and bad working code, (i usually have one or the other going HAHAHA, but after 5 years in making wips, i'm starting to learn how to manage both, and not trying to rush)
my advice =you need to do two things
1.you'll need someone to give you honest feedback, and 2.you'll need to be able to take it contructively, anyone who sees the potenital here, is going to say that its good, but if this it, as is it= is isn't, i hope you use my words as a guide for your next challenging wip work
and PM me when you get a chance, i have some stage ideas, maybe your the right person for to create

OK

Hola amiga !!
Tantos años sin saber de ti...  


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