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+9animaraz yolomate crosspotts1.0 O Ilusionista Mistah Jorge Doom Werewood EthanTheHuman el grande padre 13 posters |
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el grande padre
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| | Subject: check my jiren please October 8th 2017, 3:48 pm | |
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Last edited by el grande padre on October 8th 2017, 3:57 pm; edited 1 time in total | |
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EthanTheHuman
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Join date : 2013-12-01
| | Subject: Re: check my jiren please October 8th 2017, 3:52 pm | |
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el grande padre
Posts : 5
Join date : 2017-10-08
| | Subject: Re: check my jiren please October 8th 2017, 3:57 pm | |
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Werewood
Posts : 5691
Join date : 2014-08-11
| | Subject: Re: check my jiren please October 8th 2017, 4:27 pm | |
| Welcome to MMV el grande padre & EthanTheHuman!  Nice sprite edit, and I like his head very much!  | |
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Doom
Posts : 10512
Join date : 2014-08-22
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Mistah Jorge
Posts : 2356
Join date : 2013-07-04
Age : 26
Location : Portugal
| | Subject: Re: check my jiren please October 8th 2017, 4:40 pm | |
| Feedback:
Jiren doens't have abs, wich is something weird, maybe make bigger eyes too, oh and his feet doesn't have visible toes because he wears boots | |
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O Ilusionista
Posts : 1307
Join date : 2012-05-16
Location : Brazil
| | Subject: Re: check my jiren please October 8th 2017, 6:03 pm | |
| I have to be honest: its not good, at all.
It just Urien with other colors. The waits has no shading.
Guys, we need to give honest feedback here. Saying "nice edit" when its not good, won't help the guy. In fact, its the opposite. | |
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crosspotts1.0
Posts : 4991
Join date : 2013-04-15
Age : 32
Location : GLEN BURNIE maryland
| | Subject: Re: check my jiren please October 8th 2017, 6:56 pm | |
| I could edit him when I have time if u want | |
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yolomate
Posts : 7507
Join date : 2013-06-17
Age : 47
| | Subject: Re: check my jiren please October 8th 2017, 9:39 pm | |
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animaraz
Posts : 1805
Join date : 2012-05-20
Age : 48
Location : León, Gto.
| | Subject: Re: check my jiren please October 8th 2017, 10:26 pm | |
| Nice Edit! Good start! Now try to take care of the details. There are small details that will help you to separate Urien de Jiren (Eyes, ears, toes, excess muscles, etc.). Do not be discouraged by those who criticize you for criticizing and are unable to give a tip or correct a detail, in the mugen and in real life there will always be people like that. ¡Buen inicio! Ahora intenta cuidar más los detalles. Hay pequeños detalles que te ayudarán a separar muchisimo a Urien de Jiren (Ojos, oídos, dedos de los pies, exceso de músculos, etc). No te desanimes de aquellos que te critiquen por criticar y son incapaces de dar un tip o de corregirte un detalle, en el mugen y en la vida real siempre habrá gente así.  | |
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el grande padre
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yolomate
Posts : 7507
Join date : 2013-06-17
Age : 47
| | Subject: Re: check my jiren please October 9th 2017, 5:08 pm | |
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Werewood
Posts : 5691
Join date : 2014-08-11
| | Subject: Re: check my jiren please October 12th 2017, 3:56 pm | |
| I tend to give a positive encouragement to something I don't know Jack about, i.e. 2D spriting, when I feel like liking that, like I really liked the head el grande padre edited.  If that is something in which I have a bit of experience, i.e. MUGEN CNS coding, when I feel like liking that, like I was giving a HEALTHY MUGEN feedback to the recent Albert Wesker by FlavioCamarao.  | |
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el grande padre
Posts : 5
Join date : 2017-10-08
| | Subject: Re: check my jiren please November 3rd 2017, 3:40 pm | |
|  el hermano del jiren | |
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Fede X
Posts : 2440
Join date : 2014-06-26
Age : 42
Location : ARGENTINA PARA EL MUNDO
| | Subject: Re: check my jiren please November 3rd 2017, 6:39 pm | |
| Buena edicion, veo hermanitos latinos!!! Bienvenidos | |
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