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Eduardo Merenda
Posts : 73 Join date : 2014-09-09 Age : 30 Location : Sao Paulo, Brazil
| Subject: The Will of the Maturity May 23rd 2018, 6:08 pm | |
| A work without critic is a wasted work. And really, I having this lack of criticism when the word is review my sprites. Just drop a message when you feel the urge to do... (mugeningan did the original version) (that's 100% mine, and man it taked 2 years to make one sprite. Glad it's over)
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| | | Mistah Jorge
Posts : 2356 Join date : 2013-07-04 Age : 26 Location : Portugal
| Subject: Re: The Will of the Maturity May 23rd 2018, 8:21 pm | |
| I mean, they are not too shabby, but you took way to much time to make them... what did you use? Microsoft paint? I mean, there has to be a better, less time consuming way of doing it in case you want to do something again in the future Also, if you really want criticism, try doing something about his right leg, i think a line of a dark shade would go nicely in there or something, something like this | |
| | | yolomate
Posts : 7395 Join date : 2013-06-17 Age : 46
| | | | Eduardo Merenda
Posts : 73 Join date : 2014-09-09 Age : 30 Location : Sao Paulo, Brazil
| Subject: Re: The Will of the Maturity May 24th 2018, 12:14 am | |
| @Mistah Jorge OH, finally some critic! AT LAST! Well, for the 2 years spend, thats my comunication error. In this time, I tried to complete a sprite, and have enter 10 - 15 unfinished sprites because my life is a mess and many things happened. And for the D.D., here it go... It looks better? It's that I do not completely understand the shadowing process and so I can get a bit dependent on references ... @yolomateSorry, I don't understood what you want to say... In "that leg took rare", you wanted to say that some leg are much thin? And with the hands, who have this problem? Human Saiki? D.D.? Or both? | |
| | | Mistah Jorge
Posts : 2356 Join date : 2013-07-04 Age : 26 Location : Portugal
| Subject: Re: The Will of the Maturity May 24th 2018, 3:38 am | |
| Well, maybe he's saiyng the same thing i did about the leg. Btw, maybe i was wrong about how i drew, but it looks better, i think it could be improved by moving it a bit to the bottom, well no to to the bottom, maybe more like in here: (Keep in mind that the both guys in the image are diferent by a pixel or two, you should definitly follow the smaller one) Also, you look new here so welcome, why don't you hop here and introduce yourself? https://mugenmultiverse.forumotion.com/t280-introduce-yourself | |
| | | Eduardo Merenda
Posts : 73 Join date : 2014-09-09 Age : 30 Location : Sao Paulo, Brazil
| Subject: Re: The Will of the Maturity May 24th 2018, 4:42 am | |
| Wow. The pattern you showed is just amazing. Thanks for show a thing that I, by myself, will spend some days just to think of it. | |
| | | Mistah Jorge
Posts : 2356 Join date : 2013-07-04 Age : 26 Location : Portugal
| Subject: Re: The Will of the Maturity May 24th 2018, 5:52 am | |
| please, don't give it much praise, you drew 98% of the character, this was nothing I wish i could do shadowing like you can, if i did, i'd already make some sprites for a kof zangief | |
| | | Eduardo Merenda
Posts : 73 Join date : 2014-09-09 Age : 30 Location : Sao Paulo, Brazil
| Subject: Re: The Will of the Maturity May 25th 2018, 3:49 pm | |
| One more try of another char that I want to do, but just can make him after some years, maybe five. Kairi, the base is a sprite made by Jesus Chuchoryu and he gave the authorization to modify it. There are some details that bother me: Don't understood the position of the fingers of the right hand in the original base (Fighting EX Layer), so I think they are misaligned The emblem of the pants its just really hard to do. I tried and just turned into a bubble of pixels. And the scar of the left arm is not looking like a scar. But liked the muscles. They are more defined, and this is a great thing. | |
| | | yolomate
Posts : 7395 Join date : 2013-06-17 Age : 46
| Subject: Re: The Will of the Maturity May 25th 2018, 5:06 pm | |
| - Eduardo Merenda wrote:
- @Mistah Jorge
OH, finally some critic! AT LAST!
Well, for the 2 years spend, thats my comunication error. In this time, I tried to complete a sprite, and have enter 10 - 15 unfinished sprites because my life is a mess and many things happened.
And for the D.D., here it go... It looks better? It's that I do not completely understand the shadowing process and so I can get a bit dependent on references ...
@yolomate
Sorry, I don't understood what you want to say... In "that leg took rare", you wanted to say that some leg are much thin? And with the hands, who have this problem? Human Saiki? D.D.? Or both? RED: yep the right leg is thin. yellow: the hands look big...really big only that! the shoulder look cool but that hand are so big size! | |
| | | Eduardo Merenda
Posts : 73 Join date : 2014-09-09 Age : 30 Location : Sao Paulo, Brazil
| Subject: Re: The Will of the Maturity June 2nd 2018, 9:17 pm | |
| Oh well, now it will be more hard to do sprites. The friend I lived with (and consequently used his computer to draw) put me out of his house. Honestly, I felt betrayed by that person. Because, although my efforts were not effective, I tried to live, understand and improve as a person; and she jumped off the boat in the first misunderstanding. But, well, here comes the sprites... @yolomate: I didn't fix the hands in this moment. They will require a level of technique and patience that I don't have at the moment. But did the right leg look better? Just one more thing: Armor Ralf will be one of my first chars, and I wanna make a new concept of him. New history, new moveset and turn the worst character in the KOF series into someone cooler. I tried to make a fighting stance that passed self-confidence, from someone who is strong and knows very well of it... But here is the worst part: my lack of creativity. If you can see it, I just copy and paste the Cell stance from Dragon Ball Fighterz, and for a project that promises to be a great innovation, this is a bad start: | |
| | | Eduardo Merenda
Posts : 73 Join date : 2014-09-09 Age : 30 Location : Sao Paulo, Brazil
| Subject: Re: The Will of the Maturity June 17th 2018, 10:43 am | |
| ...HANDS... So useful, but so damn hard to draw! Oh well, here is Dante... maybe... The hair is just a mess of pixels, I can't do better than this, and maybe have some problems with the shading of the left arm and maybe I have to adjust the right arm, but there is... If you fell the urge to criticize, just drop a message, you can stone me without mercy... | |
| | | LESSARD
Posts : 2220 Join date : 2016-06-19 Age : 44 Location : In your wildest mugen Dreams
| Subject: Re: The Will of the Maturity June 17th 2018, 12:30 pm | |
| It looks very nice indeed, muito bom | |
| | | Doom
Posts : 10399 Join date : 2014-08-22
| | | | Eduardo Merenda
Posts : 73 Join date : 2014-09-09 Age : 30 Location : Sao Paulo, Brazil
| Subject: Re: The Will of the Maturity June 21st 2018, 8:05 pm | |
| A work without critic is a wasted work, because if you don't receive critics, or nobody is seeing your results or everybody is liking what you do, don't matter how you are doing. It's just my opinion about criticism. But, here he is, Nelson: The legs were the hardest part of the drawing, and I admit that I'm not very satisfied with their current format. And I think I should leave his trunk wider. But in the end I liked the process and the end result. | |
| | | Eduardo Merenda
Posts : 73 Join date : 2014-09-09 Age : 30 Location : Sao Paulo, Brazil
| Subject: Re: The Will of the Maturity June 23rd 2018, 4:25 am | |
| It's not a great thing, but this is a sprite that had been stored in the drawer for about a year. (Bad Box Art) The Great Megaman The gun is somewhat weird, but in the classic KOF style of drawing has few references of firearms ... | |
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